Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Common Weaknesses

http://theycallmefreshmoney.blogspot.com/
*Notice how this blogger uses a quotation as the subject of a sentence

http://amethysteviston.blogspot.com/
*This person made a claim instead of a paragraph... oops!

http://t-rex-howdini.blogspot.com/
*This person used a full quotation as a sentence.

http://allison789.blogspot.com/
*This person included no quotations

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